A Broken Monoku

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          deserted asphalt road -
                              
                             distance never healed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meade Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 9:04 PM
I wonder . . . was their an accident, a death or a journey down a road . . . and escape from an abusive past that distance won't heal . . . this is a great broken monoku . . . for their is not just one simple answer . . . a careful reader can see a great many things down this road.
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 4:11 PM
very deep and sad Carrie - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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