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A Broken Heart In Retrospect

Let us sit upon the ground and talk of broken hearts. We'll drink wine from a paper cup and smile now and then. Was it the first or second time that broke into parts A heart so young and eager to please and please again ? My heart is old and scarred now and it no longer aches. Fill my cup and I will tell you just how a heart breaks. 6-18-18 When Line 6 Is a Perfect Fix Contest for Silent One

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/23/2018 8:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win, Larry, beautiful imagery :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*

Larry Bradfield
Date: 6/23/2018 10:16:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/23/2018 4:26:00 PM

Such a beautifully moving poem so exquisitely expressed, Larry. Your gorgeous rhythmic lines dance with your laments so gracefully. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Larry Bradfield
Date: 6/23/2018 10:17:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan!

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/22/2018 8:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with six lines from your heart. :)

Larry Bradfield
Date: 6/23/2018 10:17:00 PM

Thank you, Susan!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/20/2018 6:48:00 PM

- A skilled and great 6 line poem, from you Larry :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne -Lise :)

Larry Bradfield
Date: 6/20/2018 9:59:00 PM

Thank you for your warming comment, Anne-Lise. It is appreciated...Larry

Silent One

Date: 6/20/2018 3:53:00 PM

So many broken hearts out there Larry.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Larry Bradfield
Date: 6/20/2018 9:58:00 PM

Yes, indeed.Anyone who hasn't had one is at least friends with someone who has. Thank you for the placement

Lyric Man

Date: 6/18/2018 4:17:00 AM

Larry, you write with a gifted pen! Please come see me!!

Larry Bradfield
Date: 6/18/2018 9:49:00 AM

Thank you, Chance...I will visit shortly!!..Larry