A Broken Heart

I have always loved you
From the first day I met you
I have always cared about you
Since I first held your hand…
But now I don’t understand…
What you’re doing to me
I just can’t comprehend
What you’re saying to me…
You don’t love me anymore
But how can that be
What made you change?
That I cannot see…
So you were lying to me
When you said “I do”
You pretended all this time
With those “I Love You’s”!
I just can’t imagine it
How you played with my heart
How you faked the smiles
From the very start!
How you took what felt so right
And shoved it in my face
How you turned our light
Into a dark empty space!
I loved you, I still do
What else could I say?
To show how true it is that… 
My mind thinks of you each day…
But it’s not like you care
You did the damage and ran
And now my biggest fear
Is that forever alone I shall stand!
I just can’t see my life without you
A life without the one that meant everything to me
A life so obscure
That darkness is all I see!
Now all I can endure
Is a life with no morality!


Eliel202

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/15/2010 7:12:00 AM
Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Felipe. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2010 10:48:00 AM
Felipe, having someone in your life whose love has drifted away can be very hard to deal with. This has happened to me and I do believe feelings sometimes just change -- we don't always understand why. But that doesn't mean we should give up hope of finding someone whose love will endure. I've been looking for this type of love for a long, long time, but I won't give up the search. I hope you don't either. Love, Carolyn
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