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A Broken Heart

They say that time, can heal a broken heart You’ll fade away, and I’ll get a new start And someday you won’t own me, the way you do today My loving heart might live another way
---------------------------------------------------------------------- From the poem "My Loving Heart" Entry: "Bite Size Poem No. 42" Poetry Contest May 1, 2022 Sponsored by: Line Gauthier (HM)

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Date: 11/10/2022 3:40:00 PM
Lovely poem, Andy ~
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Date: 5/3/2022 6:50:00 AM
Really well said Andy….just lovely. Debx
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Andy Chunn
Date: 5/3/2022 5:19:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness. I think at one time or another we've all had that broken heart.
Date: 5/2/2022 3:49:00 PM
Congratulations, Andy! Your poem is beautiful and very relatable for many of us! I know it is for me. You have a way with words that is both touching and effective in conveying a strong message. Well done! Blessings...Meghan!
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Andy Chunn
Date: 5/2/2022 5:12:00 PM
Thank you Meghan, for the kind words. Yes, I think many of us have been there. Best wishes and keep on writing.
Date: 5/2/2022 1:12:00 AM
Great and pain-filled conviction is beautifully expressed. Congratulations!
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Andy Chunn
Date: 5/2/2022 5:14:00 PM
Appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. Your description (pain-filled) is on-point. Thank you.

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