Astha Shivhare Poet Rhyme

A Bright Start

Finding myself devastated in the middle of the run, 
I built up the courage to start with the new rising sun. 
With thoughts of all the encountered failure coming one by one, 
Making my life look like a piece of pavement unwieldy done, 
I snuggled up with a few achievements, leaving behind none 

With a tint of fear, 
With a skeptical attitude towards the coming year. 
I was bolstered up with a lot of cheer. 
The importance of treating the ends as a start dawned on my broken tears.

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Beata Agustin February 5, 2023 at 9:04 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.