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A Bright Red Flashing Neon Light

Sand in the Sandwiches ~ A Tea Named Green ~ Your Shiny Chemo Head ~ Some of my many titles To encourage To entice To invite ~ Titles to call you To draw you in Like a bright red flashing neon light ~ With Just One Look she’s Norma Desmond ~ Ripe and Ready to Bathe in Gin ~ These titles intrigue and encourage For to delve inside and to read what’s within A title should captivate and titillate your senses For now you are eager and keen to begin To enter my world and get lost in the moment My title cajoles you ~ lures and excites you Happy to greet you and welcome you in Written 1st May 2021 Contest What’s in a title in 14 – 20 lines Sponsor Line Gauthier 2nd PLACE Contest ALL YOURS (May 19) Sponsor Brian Strand

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/18/2021 2:08:00 PM

Ann, you always have titles that are like an open door inviting us into "your world." Congratulations on your win! Each line was an open invitation to read to the end of your uniquely crafted poem. Blessings to you dear friend.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/22/2021 11:57:00 PM

Bless you dear Sam for your kind words and so pleased you enjoyed my words and titles ~ thank you With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/8/2021 9:36:00 PM

Ann, this is so perfect for Line’s contest! You know the secret of grabbing one’s attention with your title. I can see this fine entry at the top already. Excellent! Have a beautiful Mother’s Day my friend. Blessings xxoo

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/8/2021 9:46:00 PM

Bless you dearest Connie for your lovely words ~ you are too kind my friend. Happy Mother's Day to you too, though our Mother's Day in the UK was in March, but is now for me tinged with sadness, after the death of my only dear son in 2019 - God Bless him xx

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/2/2021 12:51:00 AM

Hello Anne. I suspect this to be a winner in Lines CONTEST. YES, Hugs for a big win! By the bye, Ann. I have been threatened, by a Poet here to COMMent by a certain time or else, he would not read me? The ultimate in arrogance as we do not Live in the same country. He had a quota he must reach of comments. Not Poets, to me. I loathe comment collectors. I was also told..do not write much.Your read numbers will bs low?Grown men, arrogant bullies. Pangie xxx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/8/2021 9:40:00 PM

Thank you dearest Panagiota for your words of encouragement my friend.. with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/30/2021 10:45:00 PM

The title of any poem is very important, but so are friends who only read your poems.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/1/2021 3:34:00 AM

Many thanks dear Victor for your kind visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx