A Bride

she pads her bra
and smiles at her reflection - -
here comes the bride

my mum had breast cancer around 16 years ago and beat it : )

Jack Horne for PD’s Pinktober contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/15/2013 7:56:00 AM
Perfect, Jack. I'll bet she is a vision and you too - looking into her survivor eyes.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/7/2013 10:33:00 PM
Jack, , lovely impressive win................ SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2013 3:40:00 PM
Jack, this one I took a different way before I read your footnote. HOw interesting it was inspired by you mum, I did not even know she had survived cancer. BIG congrats for your win. (you won, I hope!!)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2013 2:00:00 PM
Hello PINKTOBER, winning poet --- JACK --- Thank you for embracing my contest with your poem. I took my time on this particular contest, many heartfelt poems:-(... If you'd like:) stop by my latest blog "Hold My Pen While I Write." In there you will find my very own PinkTober invitation. Take Care & have yourself an awesome day... xox~ LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2013 12:24:00 AM
She must be a great woman. Go that contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/5/2013 11:21:00 AM
A big hurrah for your mom .Glad she did. Have been busy finally finished our deck before the snow came. Our fall is done and winter is on the way. I hate the thought of winter. The roads are very slippery at the moment so decided to stay in today and catch up on some comments. love phyl
Login to Reply
Date: 11/4/2013 7:03:00 AM
one big hurrah for your mom, jack... your 'ku says it all; superb!..:) huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 11/3/2013 11:26:00 PM
What a great victory poem. Good luck in the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/3/2013 10:34:00 PM
Thank you Jack, for always supporting my contest when you have the time or inspiration...luv~ LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 11/3/2013 9:00:00 PM
This is fabulous news Jack(that she beat cancer)! I really enjoyed reading this immensely wonderful write this evening my friend! What a glorious piece, Great work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/3/2013 7:31:00 PM
: ) Mum's a strong lady, Jack...love this Haiku for PD's contest! xx Annalise
Login to Reply
Date: 11/3/2013 3:28:00 PM
She survived and became a bride....wonderful news and write! Thanks for sharing. Hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 11/3/2013 12:43:00 PM
Great that mom is a survivor..It is hard on a women to go through that ordeal though..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 11/3/2013 12:19:00 PM
glad to hear your mom beat it....lovely haiku :)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/3/2013 12:18:00 PM
A tough topic, Jack... well done... Terry (& good luck in the contest!!!)
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad