A Breakaway

22 June 2010

A Breakaway

 
For mankind has the power to think big
History puts them on the pedestal of their career
Aimless drifting until fatally engaged into a drilling rig
Raised a surface at the heart of the sea to exploit oil on its frontier

Oil wells at the deepest sea-bed formed million years ago
Also, a marine habitat that proliferates at the cold bottom
Rendezvous for waterfowl and aquatic mammals arrived apropos
To add spectacle to the blue water, as accustomed

The freshwater flowing in a cascade of sparks
The sea free access to an ocean while some in landlocked
Life on Earth comes in the seas and we proceed to embark
As ocean currents supply the heat energy round the clock

Many ritually unclean substances are passing into oceans
Adulterating the purity of water in its freshness
Oil spills from off-shore and tanker spread discoloration
Suffocating marine life and ingesting illness

Chronicling the ecological cycle literally affect the food chain
Stripping resistant to their organic structure and suffer
From the toxins of oil spill prevents water replenishment
Coating aquatic surface with stain holding tougher

A closer look at dead birds and aquatic mammals
Leaving a baleful mark on the waterways
Cleaning up the breakdown oil is costly and fatal
That I may see no more escalating sense of bad omen into the ocean’s forays

13th place winner to:
GULF OIL SPILL CONTEST
7/4/2010 Sponsored by Team PoetrySoup

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/3/2010 3:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured and winning in the contest..Sara
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:20:00 PM
congrats on the feature, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 8/30/2010 9:23:00 AM
Wonderful poem congrates on being featured this week love Jayne
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Date: 8/30/2010 8:45:00 AM
Very well written! Congrats on your poem being featured this week! Caroline.
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Date: 8/30/2010 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Noel. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 10:38:00 PM
Congratulations, Noel on your win in the contest and for your poem being featured this week on the Soup! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 8/29/2010 2:07:00 PM
Congrats Noel on your featured poem this week on the Soup....a great one to share with us all ...with luv..
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations to you Noel on your win in Team PoetrySoup's contest "Gulf Oil Spill". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 3:11:00 PM
Congrats Noel my friend on your winning poem in the Gulf Oil Spill contest with this brilliant write and super win this happy Sunday.. enjoy another sweet victory.. am in Italy now.. yeah..ciao..luv..
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Date: 6/30/2010 2:27:00 AM
ENJOYED ... SARAH
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Date: 6/26/2010 4:03:00 AM
Great write about the oil spill situation...We have no way of knowing the outcome of this..What the future holds as the afermath only God knows..Thanks for the reminder..Sara
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Date: 6/22/2010 6:58:00 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Noel. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol
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