A Break of Dawn

of that fine day,
mornings magnificent brawn
and beautiful bay,
whose skylines soon would yawn,
a break of dawn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 10:13 AM
Your poetry is always a pleasure to read no matter what you are writing about Johnny. Enjoy your weekend and keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 3:32 AM
I like that image of the skylines yawning!! It was nice seeing your poetry tonight, johnny.
Wesley Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 10:20 PM
What a way to start the day. That "yawn" line is so descriptive and brings the day to life in a beautiful way. PS I love you too and your wonderful verses but you already knew that didn't you?
Onclaud Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 5:04 PM
so smooth a flow, johnny... breathtaking work with winning wishes if for a contest!..:) huggs, nette
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