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A boy with her heart

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Below is the poem entitled A boy with her heart which was written by poet Tricia Campese. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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A boy with her heart

A broken muscle, pumps and slackens.
It's feeling dulled in her chest.
Lifts a hand up to feel it move,
But there's no sound beneath her breast.

The veiny parts have all been cut, 
A very clever trick.
He whispers, “if I can't be with her, 
I won't let her live.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 2/18/2017 12:42:00 PM
That is indeed scary... Painfully sad, very very clever way to describe this happening between people.

Date: 2/15/2017 8:26:00 AM
That is very dark Tricia and kind of scary, though you have expressed this well.

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Date: 2/15/2017 8:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry
I'm a scary person....thank you for the comment! ;)