Edward Hill Poet Rhyme

A Boy and His Best Friend

A boy and best friend named Killer,
Together they shall grow.   
When one is very ill,
The other surely knows!

Faithful to one another,
They played games and also liked to run.
Though one was so much faster,
Together they still had fun.
 
Faithful and oh so loyal,
He was Johnny's good best friend.
They protected one another,
Until Killer's bitter end! 


Edward F. Hill

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Skat A June 27, 2016 at 9:20 PM Edward, nice to see your furry friend win. Love SKAT

Skat A June 22, 2016 at 11:10 PM EDWARD, NICE TO SEE DO GOOD IN A CONTEST...SKAT

Teddy Kimathi May 7, 2016 at 11:34 AM Congrats Edward, for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)

James Tate May 7, 2016 at 7:35 AM Congrats Edward on your win. Good description of boy aand his best friend.

Paul Callus May 7, 2016 at 7:15 AM Lovely; touched by the sad ending, Edward. ~ Congrats for a worthy win. // paul

Royal Ninja May 6, 2016 at 9:08 PM it was a sad end. Edward, thank you for the poem =(^.^)= RoyalT

Poet Destroyer A February 26, 2016 at 8:23 PM Edward, this is sad to end like this. This is more than a great write from you. Awesome poem, you penned a loyal friendship with a sad end in just a short few lines....a perfect 7...Linda