A Bottle So Noteworthy
Walking along the sandy seashore
late on summers evening so cool
such peaceful scene everything so still
what a tranquil setting such a pull
For a number of hours there I was
spending these moments step by step
then out of the blue floating on top
so very clear looking so very in debt
But this looked elusive indeed
out of hands grasp it seems
then with quickness seemingly came
over these succulent soft streams
Eventually, my fingers found its touch
there deep inside a little note
took it out seeing only three words
its passion loose having no coat
A bottle so noteworthy
with no details what to do
mere words but so powerful
simply short saying I love you!
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