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A Bottle So Noteworthy

Walking along the sandy seashore late on summers evening so cool such peaceful scene everything so still what a tranquil setting such a pull For a number of hours there I was spending these moments step by step then out of the blue floating on top so very clear looking so very in debt But this looked elusive indeed out of hands grasp it seems then with quickness seemingly came over these succulent soft streams Eventually, my fingers found its touch there deep inside a little note took it out seeing only three words its passion loose having no coat A bottle so noteworthy with no details what to do mere words but so powerful simply short saying I love you!

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