A Blue Note

a blue note left inside a white envelope -- stained with tears winter sun peeks through brittle leaves falling -- my tears dry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Rozario Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 11:09 AM
Enjoyed your haiku Rhonda...very nice. congrats on your awesome win!
Brown Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 6:11 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 2:36 AM
Rhonda congrats on your win..David
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 12:15 AM
Congratulations on your win...Great write!!!
May Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 7:35 PM
very nice Rhonda..congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 6:31 PM
forgot to say congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 6:30 PM
wow, Gorgeous, Rhonda. Simply gorgeous. And the blue note could even be a melancholy song!!
A   Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 6:14 PM
RHONDA, Congratulations with this enjoyable & Excellent entry! My contest was so much fun. I am so glad my senryu and haiku mix, contest did not fail, as I thought it would. ~always :-) PD
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 10:03 PM
this is so poignant. soupmail.
Onclaud Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 12:48 AM
ohhh, beautiful and nostalgic, rhonda... swing it!..:) huggs!
A   Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 10:09 PM
Rhonda, very sad... thanks for sharing..pd
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