A Blue Note

a blue note left inside a white envelope -- stained with tears winter sun peeks through brittle leaves falling -- my tears dry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/5/2012 11:09:00 AM
Enjoyed your haiku Rhonda...very nice. congrats on your awesome win!
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Date: 6/5/2012 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2012 2:36:00 AM
Rhonda congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/4/2012 12:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win...Great write!!!
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Date: 6/3/2012 7:35:00 PM
very nice Rhonda..congrats on your win
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Date: 6/3/2012 6:31:00 PM
forgot to say congrats!
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Date: 6/3/2012 6:30:00 PM
wow, Gorgeous, Rhonda. Simply gorgeous. And the blue note could even be a melancholy song!!
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Date: 6/3/2012 6:14:00 PM
RHONDA, Congratulations with this enjoyable & Excellent entry! My contest was so much fun. I am so glad my senryu and haiku mix, contest did not fail, as I thought it would. ~always :-) PD
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Date: 3/16/2012 10:03:00 PM
this is so poignant. soupmail.
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Date: 3/16/2012 12:48:00 AM
ohhh, beautiful and nostalgic, rhonda... swing it!..:) huggs!
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:09:00 PM
Rhonda, very sad... thanks for sharing..pd
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