A Blue Feather

A blue feather floats into my dreams, Carried by the storm, it softly gleams; Angry clouds gather in the heavens, They seem they're at sixes and sevens; Earth bound, the blue feather crashes hard... Falling from bed, I find my dreams jarred!
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Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 8:41 PM
Ahhh imagining oneself as a feather and then crashing down. So creative
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 5:24 PM
a deep and thought provoking poem. Faving.
Kerr Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 10:34 AM
A most profound piece reflecting on life’s abrupt often unwelcome changes. Beautiful word selection and challenging contrasts.❤️❤️‍🩹 Marvellous Joanna. Howard
Sands Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 8:19 AM
Good one! I can imagine being jolted out of a dream. Nice blue feather :)
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 2:53 AM
- Lovely, Joanna :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 2:47 AM
Nothing worse than waking up when you're having a lovely dream and you come crashing down to earth . Tom🌹
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