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"a Blowing Brezze"

The bent back trees tilt,

                        for a cool most wanted breeze

                                                      to find my window...

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Poet Destroyer A

December 10, 2012 at 9:00 PM

re-reading this poem... you are worth it.. xox~pd

Poet Destroyer A

September 28, 2010 at 12:02 PM

LoL, Michael, that is me just having fun. I don't have what it takes to claw my way with anger. If I did My x- would have been out long ago. Maybe I need to take a *how to get angry class..lol.. My son tells me i don't know how to get upset..lol..I tell you one thing, the only thing i can do is make them words hurt. thanks for your comment...luv,,..p.d.

De R

September 10, 2010 at 6:32 AM

The trees seem to be so curious of what you are doing in your room:) Such a sweet write, Michael. Emilia

Wilma Neels

September 8, 2010 at 6:41 AM

Great imagery with this Haiku partner :) Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

September 8, 2010 at 12:35 AM

Great image of the trees blowing in the breeze and tapping on your window, Michael. A somewhat eerie feeling if you don't know what is making that sound. Well done, dear friend. Love, Carolyn