A Bloody Rose

Roses here, Roses there, bloody roses everywhere. February brings them to our life, while others hide a broken wife. Young girls dream of their shining white knight, when do you think they'll see, it's nowhere in sight. Single men try everything to be romantic, ask every young girl, they still haven't learnt it. While romance fills their heads, I'm aware of the last lives it brought to death. The rose is not this passionate flower, butt the very thing that causes humans lives to go sour. Nine months later, in mid of November, young girls begin the day they will always remember. With the babies cry with its first breath of life, There's a dad trying to work out how to tell his wife. A family is born, and a family is broken, this is all because, of that bloody rose. written 14th of February 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 1/4/2018 1:54:00 PM
Wow! You are such an excellent writer. Thanks for referring me to you work. I love the idea and message in the poem, from Val to Babies mostly unwanted. -VinX from Vinzpoetry.wordpress.com
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D.A Hopkins
Date: 6/1/2018 9:10:00 AM
Thank you for your time and I am very glad to hear your enjoying my mind. I will be able to state that I really do enjoy your work also, so thank you for your time and sharing your writing. I'm just focussing on my Childrens novel series currently in hopes to afford to continue putting books out of my poetry.
Date: 2/25/2016 10:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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D.A Hopkins
Date: 3/26/2016 4:33:00 PM
Thanks heaps I hope you enjoyed this one
Date: 2/24/2016 4:09:00 AM
Wow a lovely poem Denise.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!
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D.A Hopkins
Date: 3/26/2016 4:35:00 PM
Thank you I will have to admit that I rather enjoyed writing this one a lot
Date: 2/23/2016 5:28:00 PM
WOW, Hi Denise. I'm reading my comment on the bottom. I'm glad you entered the contest. Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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D.A Hopkins
Date: 3/26/2016 4:36:00 PM
Thanks and thank you for pointing it out. I enjoyed writing this one
Date: 2/23/2016 11:09:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest it was an honor reading... again, thank you:)
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D.A Hopkins
Date: 3/26/2016 4:39:00 PM
Thanks for the recognition. I am trying to get my work at a higher standard. It boosts my confidence with each little win
Date: 2/6/2016 11:17:00 AM
The contest is name, PAIN IS LOVE, this fits the theme. ;) LINDA
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D.A Hopkins
Date: 2/20/2016 3:34:00 AM
Thank you for your help. I have entered the contest so fingers crossed
Date: 2/6/2016 8:32:00 AM
Hi, Denise, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. I find the title to be epic. I hope this is for the Love Is Pain Contest, for Royal T... You will do awesomely. I love your take on February... LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2016 12:07:00 AM
Idea is strong , needs formatting to impact
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