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For the 'Collective nouns' Poetry Contest of Suzette Richards

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a bloat of hippopotamuses zoo restrooms beckon

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/16/2024 10:49:00 AM

Well done for this creative senryu, Andrea! Congratulations on your podium finish! ~ Regards // paul

Terry Miller

Date: 8/16/2024 1:01:00 AM

Quite a visual, congratulations

Suzette Richards

Date: 8/15/2024 11:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your 3rd place win with this very vivid imagery, Andrea – I could not get the sight of it out of my mind for a while and had a good chuckle. :)

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/17/2024 12:50:00 PM

Thanks for my win. I loved this contest

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/2/2024 3:54:00 AM

Ones mind can only boggle..!

Paige Hind

Date: 7/30/2024 11:47:00 AM

HA!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/30/2024 7:16:00 AM

Dear Andrea, what a delightful read and brought a huge smile to my face. I loved that it was a deeper commentary on the nature of observation and the unexpected moments of humor found in life. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/31/2024 1:11:00 PM

thanks, Daniel.

Ink Empress

Date: 7/30/2024 7:11:00 AM

Omg what a sigh dear sweet andrea. Haha i wouldnt wanna see this sight but thats how clever you are .. with few words youv painted imagery that is so vividly done. And i think “ bloat of hippo “ is clever. Sending you light always

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/31/2024 1:11:00 PM

muchas gracia, muchacha.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/30/2024 6:49:00 AM

Quite the imagery. LOL