Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

A Blissful Sound

by Michael J Falotico

                                            I feel the breeze that carries thoughts..
                                       The strength has faded from feelings I fought..
                                  The curtain can not close nor a shade be pulled down..
                                       Its all out in the open to show what was bound..
                                   A hidden heart that was lost is now back and strong..
                                  It now knows the difference between right and wrong..
                                             A few beats less then when first found..
                                         Only now there is music and a blissful sound..

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Wilma Neels August 16, 2011 at 8:01 AM Love the title for this gem Michael, awesome message btw ;-) love W

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 14, 2011 at 4:53 PM so u liked my words I gather Michael luv and the forms work really well together ... but I doubt I outdid the master writer of intensity on PS.. haha.. we blend well together in thoughts and theories .. that is what makes it work well..luv.. our power just returned after being blackout all night from the thunder storms and still raining like crazy all up and down Jersey coast especially shore areas... we are snuggled in house today ...need a fire right now.. temps 92 to 70 overnight.. bbrr..luv

Dinda Minardi August 13, 2011 at 2:15 PM The comebacks of lost heart with few beats of blissful sound... Wonderful verse, Michael. (As usual). I wish you a wonderful weekend, my poet friend. Dinda. :)

Nette Onclaud August 13, 2011 at 7:30 AM so lucid and awesome in its poetic tone and theme, michael.. i love it! :) huggs, nette Michael J. Falotico August 13, 2011 at 9:52 AM Thank you Nettte, your comments always make me smile....hugs back to you..

Elizabeth Wesley August 12, 2011 at 6:15 PM A lovely verse Michael, conveys the gentle feelings that I love in a verse. Michael J. Falotico August 13, 2011 at 9:53 AM You have made smile with your comment, glad you enjoyed the write...Michael

Steven Cooke August 12, 2011 at 5:46 PM a lovely write i like this very good poetry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 12, 2011 at 5:13 PM true luv is pure medicine to eradicate the past hurts and scars Michael.. lovely creative piece expression wonderful emotion luv.. my Smitten and Bitten is almost true and every incident in life makes us stronger..as they say only the strong survive luv.. and we do.. your Jersey Girl is now a bronze beach bunny for sure..luv..