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A Blessing To Count

storm clouds sail away but winds usher in changes… bright arc kisses sky colors lure creatures honey bees and hummingbirds… sip fragrant petals I stare mesmerized gray day makes way for light, joy… a blessing to count *Entry for Carol’s “Haiku Weekend” contest on rainbows

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/20/2012 12:19:00 PM

This is such a beautiful series of haiku, Carolyn-- I'm sorry I haven't been able to email lately-- my connection sucks and I can only load Soup pages sometimes but my email, no dice. I sure hope that you are doing ok, my prayers are with you, Carolyn!! Keep staying strong, ok? Hugs to you!! and may angels watch over you.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/25/2012 2:38:00 AM

beautiful in form and content, carolyn... congrats with huggs! :)

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 5/24/2012 6:21:00 PM

Beautiful piece,Carolyn...Nice going.."I stand mesmerized"..Congratulations on your win.....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2012 4:44:00 PM

this is wonderful, Carolyn. Congrats on your win.

Painted Hunter

Date: 5/24/2012 1:10:00 PM

B.E.A..utiful. Congrats!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/24/2012 11:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your 2nd place win in my "Rainbow Haiku Weekend"contest Carolyn. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 5/13/2012 2:07:00 PM

another beautiful set of haiku here Carolyn.A great entry to the contest.

Robert Ball

Date: 5/13/2012 9:52:00 AM

This was quite a blessing to read. Great write....and thought. God Bless!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/12/2012 10:08:00 PM

This is simply a grandiose write my friend! I just love the way it is all put together, very nicely done! I really enjoyed everything about this poem Carolyn! Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2012 1:43:00 PM

Just beautiful Carolyn ! You have already the first place in mine eyes. - oxox love Anne-Lise

David Williams

Date: 5/12/2012 1:43:00 PM

Carolyn love this, good luck, sorry but cannot comment on blogs or soup you, I will enter your contest but my laptop is not quite picking up the picture, is it a forest? ...David