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A Blessing To Count

storm clouds sail away
but winds usher in changes…
     bright arc kisses sky

colors lure creatures
honey bees and hummingbirds…
     sip fragrant petals

I stare mesmerized
gray day makes way for light, joy…
     a blessing to count


*Entry for Carol’s “Haiku Weekend” contest on rainbows

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 6/20/2012 12:19:00 PM This is such a beautiful series of haiku, Carolyn-- I'm sorry I haven't been able to email lately-- my connection sucks and I can only load Soup pages sometimes but my email, no dice. I sure hope that you are doing ok, my prayers are with you, Carolyn!! Keep staying strong, ok? Hugs to you!! and may angels watch over you. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/25/2012 2:38:00 AM beautiful in form and content, carolyn... congrats with huggs! :) Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 5/24/2012 6:21:00 PM Beautiful piece,Carolyn...Nice going.."I stand mesmerized"..Congratulations on your win..... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/24/2012 4:44:00 PM this is wonderful, Carolyn. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Painted Hunter Date: 5/24/2012 1:10:00 PM B.E.A..utiful. Congrats! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/24/2012 11:54:00 AM Congratulations on your 2nd place win in my "Rainbow Haiku Weekend"contest Carolyn. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/13/2012 2:07:00 PM another beautiful set of haiku here Carolyn.A great entry to the contest. Login to Reply

Robert Ball Date: 5/13/2012 9:52:00 AM This was quite a blessing to read. Great write....and thought. God Bless! Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 5/12/2012 10:08:00 PM This is simply a grandiose write my friend! I just love the way it is all put together, very nicely done! I really enjoyed everything about this poem Carolyn! Great Work!! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/12/2012 1:43:00 PM Just beautiful Carolyn ! You have already the first place in mine eyes. - oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 5/12/2012 1:43:00 PM Carolyn love this, good luck, sorry but cannot comment on blogs or soup you, I will enter your contest but my laptop is not quite picking up the picture, is it a forest? ...David Login to Reply