A Blessing Bestowed - Shanzi

Curtain rises
A new life is born

Family smiling
Birth’s miracle

Hungry children
Each will eat less
Willing sacrifice



*Entry for Joann’s Shanzi contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Loving Iii Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 3:43 PM
And as I have seen God will provide more. Let's hope Mit doesn't get to make those decisions.
Poetess Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 2:32 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful win Carolyn. Hope you will be able to post more soon. Love
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 11:29 AM
Coming here to see the last poem you left before you stopped posting. A nice one, Carolyn. I sure miss you here. Keeping you in my prayers. Luv, Andrea
Horsman Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 8:33 AM
Oh this is wonderful Carolyn, it really says everything about today. with reading some comments i find you are again unwell," If i was Jesus you would be the first i would touch" you are so special.
Wesley Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 3:25 PM
The first stanza gives hope and the last is an enigma to be solved. A thoughtful verse Carolyn. Nice to be in touch again!
Kapoor Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 11:34 PM
How sweet and beautiful verse my friend concluded with a note willing sacrifice. Great write Carolyn and great win too. Congratulations my friend and sorry that I am regular now days and have missed a lot of your wonder Poems but I always remembered and missed you a lot. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra....Carolyn Devonshire
Maverick Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 3:13 PM
Hello Caroiyn congratulations on your win in my contest; Gods blessings Joe..)
Austin Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 10:13 AM
If you are reading, I'm sending love. Thinking of you daily, old friend. Love, Dave
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 5:29 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Shanzi" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 2:03 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Williams Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 10:37 AM
Carolyn congrats on your win, hope you are able to read all of these...David
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 9:59 AM
Blessings in life are abundant. A beautiful write from you as always, Carolyn. Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 9:54 AM
Wonderful shanzi from you, Carolyn. I pray that you are doing better. You are missed here, sweetie. Congrats for your win. LUv,Andrea
Poet Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 8:20 AM
Congrats Carolyn!!Missing your poetry!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 6:00 AM
congrats Carolyn on an amazing win for this incredible write.. feeling the beauty and essence of this piece luv..
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 4:32 AM
hi dear mama. this is great. it has been a long time since i saw you last. i just recommended your poems on facebook. thanks and may God be with you.
Poet Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 10:58 AM
Hi Carolyn,waiting for a new poem from you....kash
Austin Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 3:35 PM
Hi old friend. I think of you daily and hope you are having some fine moments. Love, daver
Kendrick Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 11:43 AM
A little sadness to this one in that children are starving over the world but there is joy in a new one added to the family...Reads like winning material to me..Sara
Horne Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 11:05 AM
beautiful piece, my friend - so glad to see you posting and entering contests
Song Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 12:29 AM
The sacrifices one makes for his/her family...the image of a curtain rising to represent life is profound...the last 3 lines show the depths of love..Best of luck in this difficult contest...Thinking of you and wonder how u are getting along...a huge hug and kisss! gwendolen
Poet Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 1:20 PM
What an excellent write here Carolyn.I like how you ended this verse.Best wishes to you.
Wesley Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 7:15 AM
Nothing so amazing as birth and nothing so sad as a hungry child. You combine the two in such a small space to remind us it is a growing problem. P S Francine just told me the we both are July 1st girls so I'm shouting belated happy birthday to you dear Carolyn; hope you had a beautiful day and have a year full of hope. Love, Elizabeth
Collins Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 8:27 AM
Dear Carolyn, This is stunning. Smiling and crying all at once. love, Kathy
Austin Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 10:08 AM
Sounds like this family can't afford to have more children. A blessing in disguise, maybe? I posted one with you in mind today. Love, daver
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