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a blemished sky

a blemished sky
smears greys to blurs
winter lingering


AP: 1st place 2025

Submitted on February 23, 2025 to contest 'A FEBRUARY 2025 POSTED' sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 10TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 5:37 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Definitely a whole blur of winter gray. Way to go. Sara K
Gauthier Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 5:04 PM
Thanks, Sara ~
Canerdy Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 5:51 AM
Line, CONGRATS on your win with this excellent haiku! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 1:08 PM
Thanks, Janice ~ much appreciated
Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 8:33 PM
Lovely!
Gauthier Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 6:37 AM
Thanks Kim ~
Vaso Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 3:14 AM
So beautiful :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 11:52 AM
Thank you, Arthur ~
Wolf Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 6:43 PM
Perfect, Line. Exactly my impression, anyway. :) Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 11:52 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon ~
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 4:25 PM
Hello Lin,Yes winter seems to linger. It makes spring come late. enjoy your evening, My friend. /Darlene/ Hugs/
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 9:57 AM
Hello Lin, I am like you hoping for Spring to reappear. I hope that winter will not drag on. Hugs. /Darlene/
Gauthier Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 6:37 PM
Thank you so much Darlene ~ most appreciated. I'm with with waiting for Spring... I'm quite ready !
Allison Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 3:17 PM
so few words paint a vivid picture Line, you excel at writing haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 6:36 PM
You are too kind, Jan. Hugs xx
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