A Bleeding Heart

Your promises cut like shards of 
glass
And memories remain like stains 
That show for everyone to see 
like gloss
And hopes of another love keep 
me sane
As I've tripped on the same trap 
yet again

Prepared to be a fool of love I 
kneeled
As I traded my pride for love
A fabricated fantasy which I held
But this was a pickled I couldn’t 
solve 
For you had given my love to 
another

Now my sorrows weigh heavy 
As bitterness wounds me softly
And my empty heart is left to 
bleed
For these memories I hold deed
Cave in resentment that kills.

My heart still bleeds 
For I forget not

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/26/2013 9:01:00 AM
Awwww, Ronny. I hope this is a work of fiction, though it sounds like it's straight from the heart. Stunning write, my friend. Licia :-)
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Date: 6/16/2012 9:43:00 AM
my heart bleeds, Ron. for the love of my life,but she don,t feel my pain,very poem my friend
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Date: 6/14/2012 9:22:00 PM
lovely show of pathos, ronny.. your images pierce the heart... beautiful!..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/14/2012 6:52:00 PM
Ronny, wow... deep and cuts...xox~pd
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Date: 6/14/2012 12:48:00 PM
Injuries of the heart take the longest to heal and you have conveyed this beautifully in your lovely poignant poem. Thank you for your comment on my poem. Blessings
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Date: 6/14/2012 9:18:00 AM
Ronny......always something good from you...love it!!! My heart smile for you my friend. - oxox Anne-Lise
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