Edward Ibeh Poet Senryu

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A poem unwritten
Uncluttered; a baby's mind
     Unkissed innocence



Submitted for 'What I Really Like' Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Maureen McGreavy (Winner: 4th Place)
Date written and posted: 02/26/2019

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Susan Ashley April 5, 2019 at 9:35 PM Congratulations, Edward, on your excellent and well deserved win with your potent poem. Beautiful metaphor! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Edward Ibeh April 6, 2019 at 9:14 PM Thank you very much, Susan:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu March 31, 2019 at 10:40 AM Hello Edward Ibeh, yes a baby 's mind is uncluttered. and innocence, have a nice day my friend. Edward Ibeh March 31, 2019 at 10:46 AM Thank you for the comments and visit, Darlene!:-)

Eve Roper March 4, 2019 at 10:34 AM Congratulations on your win, Edward. Edward Ibeh March 4, 2019 at 1:48 PM Thank you, Eve!:-)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 4, 2019 at 7:29 AM Such a powerful metaphor, it clung to me, congratulations on your win Edward! xomo Edward Ibeh March 4, 2019 at 8:59 AM Thank you so much for placing me, Maureen!:-) Most appreciated.

Anisha Dutta March 3, 2019 at 11:42 PM BIG CONGRATS to win. Edward Ibeh March 4, 2019 at 5:24 AM Thank you, Anisha!:-)

Line Gauthier March 3, 2019 at 9:13 PM Congrats on your win, Edward. Very sweet. Edward Ibeh March 4, 2019 at 5:24 AM Thank you, Line!:-)

Andrea Dietrich February 28, 2019 at 7:01 PM such an interesting perspective, Edward!! I really like this. Edward Ibeh March 1, 2019 at 6:24 AM Thank you, Andrea!:-) I'm glad you did!

Nette Onclaud February 26, 2019 at 9:10 AM edward, the beginnings of a poem is clear as soul's pure intention... beautifully done!...huggs Edward Ibeh February 26, 2019 at 2:44 PM Thank you, Nette!:-)