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dreary eyed, musky languor- tassels tight a loose walk paraded by looser convictions an acquaintance of that sad, lowly height that alluded odysseys and several hymns open window, surely dries out the stink encroached in the room shadows and fleas the zeitgeist of this area; to even think flowers and dewdrops burly trees; to seize the thought, it lingers, but only so little too soon, to even land a misty eyed dream.

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Date: 11/24/2017 1:53:00 AM
lovely poem........with wonderful meaning "open window, surely dries out the stink"
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Date: 1/22/2016 10:36:00 PM
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Date: 3/17/2015 10:02:00 PM
Maximillian, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/14/2015 7:37:00 PM
Maximillian, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/10/2015 2:16:00 PM
- A great poem Maximillia, thank you for chose to share it with me - Welcome to P- Soup, hope there will be more writing from you in the future - I wish you good luck - A quick greeting from Norway // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/11/2015 12:14:00 PM
thank you, and greetings to you too!