A Black Hole

I'm lost in a void
Of eternity.
The eye of a storm,
The depth of the sea.
A black hole rips me from inside out.
Gravity ending me..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Ferguson Avatar
September 29, 2008 at 9:50 AM
I sent you friend request on myspace. Btw aren't you supposed to be in school?
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September 29, 2008 at 9:24 AM
I think your myspace is set to private. It's easy to become bogged down and to think lower of yourself then you really are. I used to think when I was younger what girl would ever want a guy like me. And I'm not trying to boast by saying this, I'm just being honest, but I've had six girlfriends in my life. And that's more than most of any of the popular kids at my high school ever had. I'm not scared of you btw. I used to have a gf who cut herself years before dating me so i can understand.
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