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A Birthday In Place

Believe it or not, my birthday’s been great Though not one I would have predicted, Assuming that I would be down in the dumps For being so virus-restricted. My pre-sunrise walk was delightful because The rain I’d expected held off And no one I passed on the street came too close And I heard not a sneeze or a cough. Before my first coffee, my son and his kids Called with wishes no money could buy And my grandson surprised me by writing a poem Starting, “I love my nana…” Oh, my! A flurry of phone calls and texts followed suit Since each person I know’s stuck at home, All with wishes so special I just don’t have room To describe them inside of a poem. There was breakfast and lunch and the governor’s talk Which inspired a fun-to-do task: With some quilting material, flowered and green, I then stitched for myself a new mask! Creative juice flowed so in place of a cake I baked cupcakes to mark my big day And my grandkids, on FaceTime, with very big puffs Blew the flame on the candle away. Some long-distance toasts with my aunt and some friends And then dinner and wine with my spouse Set my spirits on fire with feelings so strong It would take more than water to douse. We may have to adjust in this craziness now To reality unlike before But it isn’t all negative for we may find Unexpected surprises in store.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 4/4/2020 9:37:00 PM
So nice to hear that your birthday was so pleasant and so special. Biz hundred tzvantsik, Ilene, mit a gezunt! Many happy returns on the day! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 4/4/2020 2:18:00 PM
Birthday wishes Ilene! And kudos on this poem -- it is a really good one.
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Date: 4/4/2020 1:35:00 PM
Happy birthday! I marvel at your ability to manage your time and words so well! Stay safe and healthy! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 4/4/2020 12:29:00 PM
Ilene, I love your poem A Birthday in Place. I lead a poetry appreciation group for the U3A in Leigh, England and I am sending out a poem a day to the group to keep everyone's spirits up. It is a forum to keep in touch and to appreciate poetry. Could I share your poem with them?
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 4/4/2020 12:47:00 PM
Sure thing!
Date: 4/4/2020 2:11:00 AM
Ilene, your birthday was filled with so many timely and surprising delights. So glad it was a happy day filled with the love of family and loved ones... I like the candles being blown out on FaceTime! My daughter's birthday was Tuesday and she had some similar creativity going on. Loved it! Happy birthday, friend!
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