Ava A. Carlton Poet Haiku

A Birthday Delight

A BIRTHDAY DELIGHT


A new dawn blazes
Forth as you walk for pleasure
you are well measured

At a new morn sunset
birthing upon your bright eyes
will be yours to keep

A delightful sight
on your birthday of May Seventh
A BIRTHDAY DELIGHT


Written: 05/02/2016

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Bernardo F. Asuncion November 29, 2016 at 11:29 PM A new dawn blazes Forth as you walk for pleasure you are well measured... What a nice birthday gift... congrats on being featured.. Ava A. Carlton July 12, 2017 at 10:49 PM Thank you so very much Bernard for your comment, I have been gone for quite some time without having no electronics around on my long extended trip. Sure is nice to be back to this electronic age of a city.

Skat A May 3, 2016 at 9:48 PM Eva, a nice sweet write. skat Ava A. Carlton May 17, 2016 at 1:08 AM Thank you so very much Skat for your real nice comment on this penned poem for my son.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2016 at 6:53 AM - Congratulations on your birthday, Peter ! - Lovely written, Eva - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Ava A. Carlton May 17, 2016 at 1:11 AM Thank you so very much Sunshine Smile for your lovely comment on this poem of mine, my son really enjoyed his birthday. hugs Eva

Jan Allison May 2, 2016 at 5:50 PM I hope he has a wonderful day Eva:-) hugs Jan xx Ava A. Carlton May 2, 2016 at 9:59 PM I'm quite sure my son Peter will have a great day, he seems to have a happy birthday no matter what he does.. He is so laid back like his mother... hugs Eva