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A Birthday Delight

A BIRTHDAY DELIGHT


A new dawn blazes
Forth as you walk for pleasure
you are well measured

At a new morn sunset
birthing upon your bright eyes
will be yours to keep

A delightful sight
on your birthday of May Seventh
A BIRTHDAY DELIGHT


Written: 05/02/2016

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Bernard F. Asuncion Date: 11/29/2016 11:29:00 PM A new dawn blazes Forth as you walk for pleasure you are well measured... What a nice birthday gift... congrats on being featured.. Login to Reply Ava A. Carlton Date: 7/12/2017 10:49:00 PM Thank you so very much Bernard for your comment, I have been gone for quite some time without having no electronics around on my long extended trip. Sure is nice to be back to this electronic age of a city.

Skat A Date: 5/3/2016 9:48:00 PM Eva, a nice sweet write. skat Login to Reply Ava A. Carlton Date: 5/17/2016 1:08:00 AM Thank you so very much Skat for your real nice comment on this penned poem for my son.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2016 6:53:00 AM - Congratulations on your birthday, Peter ! - Lovely written, Eva - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Ava A. Carlton Date: 5/17/2016 1:11:00 AM Thank you so very much Sunshine Smile for your lovely comment on this poem of mine, my son really enjoyed his birthday. hugs Eva

Jan Allison Date: 5/2/2016 5:50:00 PM I hope he has a wonderful day Eva:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Ava A. Carlton Date: 5/2/2016 9:59:00 PM I'm quite sure my son Peter will have a great day, he seems to have a happy birthday no matter what he does.. He is so laid back like his mother... hugs Eva