A Bird's Eye View

striking
a bird's eye view
that's how clearly I see
our lovely, private paradise,
our love




Modern Or Traditional Cinquain Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: William Kekaula 
Date written and submitted: 02/05/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Creative way to go with this winner. Congrats. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 12:09 PM
Thank you, Sara:-)
Somadas Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 10:48 PM
Sweet Cinquain with a twist.. Great win Edward..
Ibeh Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 8:54 AM
Thank you, Jenish:-)
Roper Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 3:01 PM
Congratulations on your win, Edward. Eve
Ibeh Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 3:51 PM
Thank you very much, Eve:-) Congratulations for your win, too!
Romios Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 12:30 PM
Best to you...Edward.. A gorgeous verse! Panagiota xx
Ibeh Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 7:01 PM
Thank you, Panagiota:-)
Adams Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 11:20 AM
so beautiful Edward...best wishes in the contest :) hugs
Ibeh Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 11:55 AM
Thank you so much, Sandra:-)
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