Notes About The Poem

A Bird Struggling To Fly

A broken bird repeatedly tries 
to leap into the wind to fly away
only to have its freedom denied.

Desperate, it forcefully flaps its wings,
propelling itself to sever the string 
that tethers it down to earth...

but is continually shedding its feathers
And no one is around to see it struggle,
no one to cut the string binding its legs.

If only this songbird could speak,  
it'd tell any soul in sight its true plight
This helpless bird, a lonely woman...

trapped with man she doesn't love,
and vice versa. She longs to fly 
the coop and finally taste the open air

but is tethered to controlling husband
with money to burn; she cursed 
by financial dependency.




Date written and submitted: 08/22/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rushing Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Security or freedom, a difficult balancing act. You have captured this dilemma quite nicely! Good luck in the contest!
Ibeh Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 4:00 PM
Thank you, Wren:-)
Michael Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 4:45 AM
A serious poem indeed...So unfortunate these situations...A good message to be aware...
Ibeh Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 6:26 AM
Thank you, Arturo:-)
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