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A Bird Sings With Vomiting Blood

Sijo 1 it sounds sad and painful when/a little bird tears her heart because of the acute pain/sustained wound from piercing thorn she twists body in agony/and sings with vomiting blood

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Date: 3/21/2016 8:40:00 PM
Dramatic and brutal write with strong imagery.
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Date: 3/22/2016 4:11:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and comment. Su

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