A Big Party At the Lake

Dug and Blake wanted to bake
For a party at the lake
They decided to make-
Cheesecake and cupcakes
A large order to fill with-
no mistakes
It was a big order to undertake

Blake made large quantities 
of fishcakes
All coated with eggs and cornflakes
Dug also decided to take some steaks
Two choices for the meals for the lake
Then later dessert cupcakes and cheesecakes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Berggren Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 1:33 PM
Sounds like you had a fun time at the lake. The rhyming is very good.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 1:51 PM
Hello Alfred, I enjoy to rhyme.This was a fun poem to write.Have a good day my friend.
Pett Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 2:26 PM
Lovely poem Darlene, these are the parties I like, cupcakes and cheesecake sounds good to me. :))
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 12:59 PM
I would like to go to a party like that as well.I also like cupcakes.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 12:48 PM
I would like to go to a party like that as well.I also like cupcakes.
Smith Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 2:02 PM
Sounds yummy Darlene, good work...
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 12:50 PM
Hello Charlie, I want you to know that I enjoy your poetry.Yes it does sound yummy to me to.
Vinson Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Nice, Darlene. Oh lord am I hungry... ; )
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 2:54 PM
Hello Dug, I also made myself hungry.Nice to meet you.
Tran Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 5:04 PM
I rated 7^^
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 2:55 PM
Hello Loic, nice to meet you thank you for the 7.
Green Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 3:01 PM
Oh for goodness sakes. :) This was fun Darlene and now I am hungry.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 3:50 PM
Lets go to the beach and eat. I am hungry to. I enjoyed writing this poem. Happy Easter. Love and hugs.
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 3:01 PM
- Sounds like a nice party, Darlene :) - Great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 3:48 PM
Hello Sunshine, I have enjoyed writing this poem. yes it was a big crowd. I could see when I was writing it.
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