A Big Party At the Lake

Dug and Blake wanted to bake
For a party at the lake
They decided to make-
Cheesecake and cupcakes
A large order to fill with-
no mistakes
It was a big order to undertake

Blake made large quantities 
of fishcakes
All coated with eggs and cornflakes
Dug also decided to take some steaks
Two choices for the meals for the lake
Then later dessert cupcakes and cheesecakes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/17/2017 1:33:00 PM
Sounds like you had a fun time at the lake. The rhyming is very good.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/17/2017 1:51:00 PM
Hello Alfred, I enjoy to rhyme.This was a fun poem to write.Have a good day my friend.
Date: 4/21/2017 2:26:00 PM
Lovely poem Darlene, these are the parties I like, cupcakes and cheesecake sounds good to me. :))
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/22/2017 12:59:00 PM
I would like to go to a party like that as well.I also like cupcakes.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/22/2017 12:48:00 PM
I would like to go to a party like that as well.I also like cupcakes.
Date: 4/17/2017 2:02:00 PM
Sounds yummy Darlene, good work...
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/22/2017 12:50:00 PM
Hello Charlie, I want you to know that I enjoy your poetry.Yes it does sound yummy to me to.
Date: 4/13/2017 9:14:00 PM
Nice, Darlene. Oh lord am I hungry... ; )
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/14/2017 2:54:00 PM
Hello Dug, I also made myself hungry.Nice to meet you.
Date: 4/13/2017 5:04:00 PM
I rated 7^^
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/14/2017 2:55:00 PM
Hello Loic, nice to meet you thank you for the 7.
Date: 4/13/2017 3:01:00 PM
- Sounds like a nice party, Darlene :) - Great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2017 3:48:00 PM
Hello Sunshine, I have enjoyed writing this poem. yes it was a big crowd. I could see when I was writing it.
Date: 4/13/2017 3:01:00 PM
Oh for goodness sakes. :) This was fun Darlene and now I am hungry.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2017 3:50:00 PM
Lets go to the beach and eat. I am hungry to. I enjoyed writing this poem. Happy Easter. Love and hugs.
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