Janice Canerdy Poet Senryu

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A Big No-No For Civilians

Unacceptable--
implementing climbing skills
at the Capitol



January 14, 2021
entered in the Senryu--Humorous, Satirical, or Dark Poetry Contest 
    placed 3rd
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Gershon Wolf January 16, 2021 at 8:15 PM Excellent senryu, Janice. Honestly surprised it didn't place higher, as you managed to pen a poem that was both dark and humorous (honestly!) in three short lines. Bravo! Well-done! :) gw Janice Canerdy January 18, 2021 at 6:30 AM Gershon, THANKS a million! Janice

Jennifer Proxenos January 15, 2021 at 9:08 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest Janice - truly unacceptable, awesome Senryu. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:26 AM Thanks so much, Jennifer. Janice

Mark Koplin January 15, 2021 at 5:20 AM Making things great I guess, Congrats on your win! Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:25 AM I'm praying they won't try to "make things great" again on inauguration day! Thanks, Mark. Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2021 at 3:01 AM - Unacceptable !!! - Congratulations on your win, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:23 AM Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice

Line Gauthier January 14, 2021 at 6:49 PM at least some of them are wearing masks ~ Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:23 AM Yes! Thanks so much, Line. :-) Janice

Kim Rodrigues January 14, 2021 at 5:01 PM I was working so it was all over by the time I knew about it. Congratulations, Janice! Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:22 AM Thanks so much, Kim. Janice

Tom Cunningham January 14, 2021 at 3:28 PM Back with congrats Janice Tom Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:21 AM Thanks so much, Tom Janice

Jan Allison January 14, 2021 at 3:16 PM Dropping back with many congrats Janice:-) hugs Jan xx Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:21 AM Thanks so much, Jan. I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2021 at 1:14 PM great satire. Congrats on the win. Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:20 AM Thanks so much, Andrea. I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice

Ilene Bauer January 14, 2021 at 1:07 PM well-said, janice! if only that were the worst of it... Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:19 AM Thanks, Ilene! I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice

Tania Kitchin January 14, 2021 at 12:27 PM Janice, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever poem! Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:18 AM Tania, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my placement! Janice

Vijay Pandit January 14, 2021 at 8:37 AM Well said, Janice--shameful display of attack on our democracy. Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:09 AM Yes, absolutely mortifying. Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice

Tom Cunningham January 14, 2021 at 7:01 AM Couldn't believe what I was seeing Janice, I hope we never witness attacks on democracy in the western world again. Tom Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:08 AM Thanks, Tom. I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice

Jan Allison January 14, 2021 at 6:34 AM spot on Janice... lets hope we never see the likes of this again it sent shock waves across the world:-( hugs Jan xx Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:06 AM Thanks so much, Jan. I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice