A Better Mousetrap

A better mousetrap he addresses
To the unbelieving masses.
Painless, bloodless, the creature won’t feel a thing!

They shake their empty heads at the impossible
For there is always hurt in Death’s Sting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 8:30 AM
Wise words indeed - we had a mousetrap - called the mouse Houdini - he would steal the food and run away... it worked for him twice... then the third time he was no more:-( hugs jan xx
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