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A Better Me

My heavenly fathers love is my Protection... As I walk his path for Perfections... A few times I lost sight of which Direction... Yet I keep stride and looked for my Corrections... Learning that life goes on after Rejections... The devils work spreads like a horrible Infection... Trying to stay true to God with No Objections... Sorting out the positive and negativity in different Sections... I've gotten rid of the worst like a Disconnection... I shall judge NOT on ones Imperfections... I see the BIG picture of Life, through my life's Projection... Doing unto others as they do unto me with Affection... Staying true to myself I don't worry about Impressions... In life there will be a point of Intersection... With God in my life is Greater than a Collection... So I just play things cool with circumspect ion... I will receive his Love in a Great Reflection...

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Date: 5/9/2011 8:35:00 PM
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Date: 5/9/2011 8:30:00 PM
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Date: 5/9/2011 10:50:00 AM
@ Carol I thank you for your warm welcome. Ur comments are sincere and open I adore that of you. May ur Poetry Soup experiences be surly blessed... Do u have n e advice for this poem.. I had another poet comment to me but they weren't adivising they where downing me and my views... I'm a beginner with my writes being expressed and I'm open for advice, but there's a way to do so...
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Date: 5/9/2011 5:35:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lakisa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2011 9:20:00 PM
@ Morning Mist, that's ur insight... Very well now.
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