"a Better Fix"

I thought I helped you but not so true...
I am sad to see that my work made you blue...
The more I did, might have made it worse...
This problem you can fix its not a curse...
There is light at the end of a dark cave...
But the walk there, you must tread light and behave...
There are potholes and man made traps along this path...
Don't trust a soul and cover up for the draft...
But once your there and you mind is clear...
We can get back to where we were and trust again my dear...
Life is not a story book with happy endings all the time...
We must watch out for demons and tricks of crime...
I'm here waiting when your back to yourself...
With a hug and kiss for you and a smile for myself...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 8:20 PM
There is typo in 9th line 'their' 'you'. Nice expressions kiss for you and a smile for myself
Byrne Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 6:04 PM
nice write..well done!
Culverhouse Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 2:55 PM
enjoyed reading today!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 2:53 PM
So sweet Michael.. and intricate words in this write for the reader to weed out the message.. we all have bad days .. I like to have all good days so its a constant effort to make a bad day good ..but ..it works...so its all good ..eventually.. hold on.. brilliant as always my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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