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A Beautiful Siren Woman of His Dreams

u a w e x l p r o s e s S beautiful siren woman of his dreams, Magically feminine, a paragon of sensual overload, wonderful in her pure innocence having no idea how appealing she is just in being herself, laughing at no one, Giving everyone a chance to be their best, ready always to champion the underdog, doing what is necessary to show kindness and love to strangers, and non strangers alike. She has spiritual awareness, raging through her. She knows so much and yet does not feel in any way superior to her family or peers. She is a ready helpmate just by being her unique fabulous self, listening to her heart she is helpful and kind, and she is revered and truly appreciated by those who earn her trust and especially by those who have loved and cherished her. Beautiful siren woman, hear her now. Written 12-18-2018 Contest: The Shape of My ART Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Ann Gilmour

Date: 12/29/2018 1:19:00 AM

Caren this poem is stunning in content and shape, totally fabulous, utterly divine, I could go on forever Caren, many congrats to you and a FAV for me! Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/29/2018 5:05:00 AM

Thank you Ann. It was an easy thing to visualize, but I had to do lots of practices to get it the way I wanted it. I kept opening it up and trying one more letter this way or that way. The challenge was the typing of it for sure! Happiest of holidays to you, my friend. I trust this year will be wonderful for you.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/28/2018 8:42:00 PM

Wow!! I enjoyed reading this great poem, Caren , very well written and the shape fabulousssssssssssss. Coagulations on your win! Happy New Year. Hugs Eve ~`*

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/28/2018 11:38:00 PM

Thank you Eve. Happy New Years to you my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/28/2018 8:37:00 PM

Nicely done! Congrats!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/28/2018 11:38:00 PM

Thank you Kim. I was very pleased.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/28/2018 8:28:00 PM

Oh, I just love the beauty of your poem, Caren, both the shape and the content. Wonderfully inspiring and shapely poetry. Congratulations on your excellent win, my friend. Warmest wishes for a happy new year.. ~Susan

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/28/2018 8:37:00 PM

Thank you. I had great fun with this one. The body was pretty ridiculous to do, luckily my artistic side said "wait and type it in the poetry box this time, not like last time which was a disaster. I did 6 practices before I got it the way I wanted it.

P.M. Richter

Date: 12/28/2018 8:20:00 PM

Very beautiful ~ Congratulations on your win!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/28/2018 8:37:00 PM

Thank you P.M. I was honored for sure as was siren woman.

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/28/2018 4:10:00 PM

Awesome shape poem, Caren. Congrats on your high placement.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/19/2018 11:44:00 AM

Very well penned; best of luck in the contest.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/19/2018 1:55:00 PM

Thank you M.L. I found out the hard way once upon a time you have to practice these a bit and then type them directly into the contest box AFTER you get it how you thought it should be. The typing is the tricky part.