A Beautiful Siren Woman of His Dreams

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           S    beautiful siren woman of his dreams, 
               Magically feminine, a paragon of sensual
              overload, wonderful in her pure innocence 
             having no idea how appealing she is just 
               in being herself, laughing at no one,  
                  Giving everyone a chance to be
                     their best, ready always to
                       champion the underdog, 
                       doing what is necessary
                        to show kindness and 
                        love to strangers, and
                       non strangers alike. She
                   has spiritual awareness, raging
                through her.  She knows so much 
                and yet  does not  feel in any way 
               superior to her family or peers. She
               is a ready helpmate just by being her
              unique fabulous self, listening to her heart
              she is helpful and kind, and she is revered
               and truly appreciated by those who earn
               her    trust   and            especially by those
               who have loved              and  cherished  her.
               Beautiful siren                woman, hear her now.


Written 12-18-2018            Contest: The Shape of My ART
                        Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gilmour Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 1:19 AM
Caren this poem is stunning in content and shape, totally fabulous, utterly divine, I could go on forever Caren, many congrats to you and a FAV for me! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Krutsinger Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 5:05 AM
Thank you Ann. It was an easy thing to visualize, but I had to do lots of practices to get it the way I wanted it. I kept opening it up and trying one more letter this way or that way. The challenge was the typing of it for sure! Happiest of holidays to you, my friend. I trust this year will be wonderful for you.
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 8:42 PM
Wow!! I enjoyed reading this great poem, Caren , very well written and the shape fabulousssssssssssss. Coagulations on your win! Happy New Year. Hugs Eve ~`*
Krutsinger Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 11:38 PM
Thank you Eve. Happy New Years to you my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 8:37 PM
Nicely done! Congrats!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 11:38 PM
Thank you Kim. I was very pleased.
Ashley Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 8:28 PM
Oh, I just love the beauty of your poem, Caren, both the shape and the content. Wonderfully inspiring and shapely poetry. Congratulations on your excellent win, my friend. Warmest wishes for a happy new year.. ~Susan
Krutsinger Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 8:37 PM
Thank you. I had great fun with this one. The body was pretty ridiculous to do, luckily my artistic side said "wait and type it in the poetry box this time, not like last time which was a disaster. I did 6 practices before I got it the way I wanted it.
Marc Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 8:20 PM
Very beautiful ~ Congratulations on your win!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 8:37 PM
Thank you P.M. I was honored for sure as was siren woman.
Gauthier Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 4:10 PM
Awesome shape poem, Caren. Congrats on your high placement.
Kiser Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 11:44 AM
Very well penned; best of luck in the contest.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Thank you M.L. I found out the hard way once upon a time you have to practice these a bit and then type them directly into the contest box AFTER you get it how you thought it should be. The typing is the tricky part.
Rose  Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 11:14 PM
ah, this is stunning to say the least. Winning wishes dear lady
Krutsinger Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 8:10 AM
Thank you Pixie. Not easy to do for me. I had a lot of practice.
Bangalee Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:34 PM
wow- wonderful shape of sexy siren woman
Krutsinger Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 8:10 AM
Thank you Mahtab. You should have seen all of my "practice" sheets.
Blown Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:01 PM
thanks for that...inspiring work
Krutsinger Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 8:11 AM
I had fun getting this where I liked it.
Chan Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 7:15 PM
A heart of gold and a knockout figure too! Brilliant shape, Caren, one of the most memorable I've seen. Love it!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 8:11 AM
Thank you Bernard. You will never know how hard I struggled to get her the way I wanted her.
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