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A Beautiful Evening

Was a beautiful evening...yes it was...when I was with u... Time flew past just like birds...when I was with u... Would be longing for that lovely evening...for years to come... Don’t know when...but am sure... I will be again with u...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/22/2008 6:42:00 PM
This is excellent. The poem flows very well. I can see beautiful images when you are together with your lovie dovie. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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