Vladislav Raven Poet Iambic Pentameter

A Beauteous Sight - Iambic Pentameter

The desire within my heart it shall flow
Like a river of Love into your soul
The light of Love within my heart shall glow
And I shall send it to its final goal

Across the miles on ethereal plain
I do send my light on the wings of Love
And I shall be with you now once again
When we have our dream in Heaven above

My Love I feel the stirring of passion
When my eyes behold A Beauteous Sight
Tonight our Love may we never ration
As we walk out into our dream of night.

11/01/2019.

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Vladislav Raven January 17, 2019 at 6:18 PM I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Connie Marcum Wong January 16, 2019 at 1:01 PM 'The desire within my heart it shall flow Like a river of Love into your soul' these lines are captivating Mike and prove what a romantic soul you possess. Gorgeous! xxoo : ) Vladislav Raven January 17, 2019 at 10:16 AM Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Trying some shorter forms within my Valentine's collection. I am enjoying writing this collection. The love is still flowing. have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2019 at 7:39 PM Yes, this a beauteious sight AND a beauteous write, my friend! Vladislav Raven January 13, 2019 at 8:01 AM Hi Andrea, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this work, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am trying a few different forms, especially the shorter forms. The heart is still singing. My rose is still in full bloom. I shall return to these writes after my Valentine.s collection. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Silent One January 12, 2019 at 11:40 AM I agree with Vijay, great flow to this poem my friend. You write romance so well.. Vladislav Raven January 12, 2019 at 1:21 PM Hi Silent, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am glad you liked the piece. The heart always keeps singing my friend. I decided to try writing the romance in shorter forms, just too see how it would go. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Vijay Pandit January 12, 2019 at 7:35 AM Beautiful flow and rhythm to your words..a lovely poem of passion and romance, Mike. Vladislav Raven January 12, 2019 at 1:06 PM Hi Vijay, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Still trying shorter forms. Enjoying the process. I find the heart can sing just the same. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Heidi Sands January 11, 2019 at 6:32 PM Absolutely beautifully written. I love this. :) Vladislav Raven January 11, 2019 at 7:41 PM Hi Heidi, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this write, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am just trying to see if I can write in the shorter forms. My rose is still singing its songs of love. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX