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A Beauteous Sight

A Rose I now hold
It is A Beauteous Sight
Ruby lips to kiss

10/01/2019

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Date: 1/17/2019 6:21:00 PM
I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 1/10/2019 5:48:00 PM
a beauteous little poem too, my friend. Thanks for visiting me today.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/11/2019 7:57:00 AM
Hi Andrea, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Haiku, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked my little piece. I always enjoy my visits to your work Andrea. The rose in my heart is the rose I try to place on the written page. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 1/10/2019 1:58:00 PM
I am convinced you can shine in any form you write in after reading this beauty Mike. A romantic gem! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/10/2019 3:46:00 PM
Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Haiku. I am so glad you liked the piece. I would try and write love and romance in any form. The heart is ever ready to sing. It had to be the rose, flower or womanhood when the title was "A Beauteous Sight." Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike.
Date: 1/10/2019 12:57:00 PM
Excellent haiku, Vladislav! The way a rose's petals open, they do look like lips waiting for a kiss. Hugs, Carolyn
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/10/2019 3:31:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Haiku, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Whatever way this piece is taken, whether it be of the rose or of womanhood the meaning is the same. The rose ever sings in my heart. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 1/10/2019 11:37:00 AM
You can be as romantic with a three liner as much as with a long poem, Mike. Pleased to see you coming out of your comfort zone, my friend. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/10/2019 3:19:00 PM
Hi Paul, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Haiku, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It is nice to try different forms Paul. I always seem to have trouble with the shorter forms, well, am I not the man who takes ten lines to say Hello. I enjoyed this one. have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 1/10/2019 10:00:00 AM
My dear friend, I’m moved by your haiku’s beautifully captured romance. The feeling is of loving adoration.. Enrapturing passionate poetry, Mike. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 1/10/2019 3:49:00 PM
You are such a romantic gentleman, my friend:))
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/10/2019 3:08:00 PM
Hi Susan, thank you for dropping by and the comment my Haiku, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Trying some of the shorter forms. The rose sings within the heart. I shall ever hold the rose in highest esteem, be it the flower or womanhood. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 1/10/2019 8:35:00 AM
Splendid :)
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Date: 1/10/2019 2:58:00 PM
Hi Maureen, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It is something new for me. I am not used to doing the shorter forms. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 1/10/2019 7:55:00 AM
lovely haiku Mike nothing beats the beauty of a rose. Tom
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Date: 1/10/2019 2:42:00 PM
Hi Tom, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Haiku, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. You are right there Tom beats the beauty of a rose, whether it be the most beautiful of the garden or womanhood. The heart ever sings. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 1/10/2019 7:27:00 AM
A beautiful haiku--so well written, Mike.
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Date: 1/10/2019 2:27:00 PM
Hi Vijay, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Haiku, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The time comes when one has to move on and try many different forms. I did enjoy writing this one. have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 1/10/2019 7:20:00 AM
Nicely done.....
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Date: 1/10/2019 2:15:00 PM
Hi John, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Haiku, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am used to writing larger poems but I know I should try out the shorter forms. The rose forever blooms in the heart. Have a wonderful Thursday....Mike.
Date: 1/10/2019 7:18:00 AM
A beautiful poem to read this morning! Well done :)
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Date: 1/10/2019 2:06:00 PM
Hi Heidi, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Haiku, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The rose, whether it be the flower or womanhood is ever a beauteous sight. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 1/10/2019 6:42:00 AM
- Lovely and romantic, Mike :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/10/2019 1:22:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Haiku, it is much appreciated. am so glad you did like the piece. Woman is the rose in the garden of life. The rose is the queen of flowers. Whether the poem is taken as woman or rose, the meaning is the same, Love. have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX