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A Battle of Wills

life will continue 
       broken my will without you 
                        will tomorrow come 


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David Kavanagh

allegorydepressionfamilyironylifehaiku

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Christopher Flaherty

September 30, 2020 at 2:59 PM

With a battle you cant win Without the will to face tomorrow

Christopher Flaherty

October 1, 2020 at 12:43 PM

Yeah somtimes apart is better David

David Kavanagh

September 30, 2020 at 3:32 PM

Genius Christopher you felt it too cheers David

Sigrid Ermine

September 29, 2020 at 8:36 PM

Hi David..... More in relation to Honest Con than your touching Haiku..... You're so dear..... Yes, I was expressing my vengeful side there.... It was kind of evil..... And whingey, woa is me...... Referring to average people as privileged. It definitely had to be deleted, especially if the intended victim read it, I could have deviated and excused it as something else, but it would have incriminated me. Not sure if I will try to prove my point by taking someone for a ride, surely no point!!

Sigrid Ermine

October 2, 2020 at 5:16 AM

- You're a living legend, David -

David Kavanagh

September 29, 2020 at 11:33 PM

Ha ha incriminated through our poetry, you are wicked Sigrid, it was brilliant but I understand, I’ve deleted a few of my own, thought they looked good at the time but after sleeping on it, and feeling refreshed it was like someone else had written the poem, there is no victim if they are willing participants your giving them something they’d never have got except for their privileged position, I read it as a symbiotic relationship an honest con indeed, cheers David

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