A Battle of Wills

life will continue broken my will without you will tomorrow come By David Kavanagh

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 9/30/2020 2:59:00 PM

With a battle you cant win Without the will to face tomorrow

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 10/1/2020 12:43:00 PM

Yeah somtimes apart is better David

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/30/2020 3:32:00 PM

Genius Christopher you felt it too cheers David

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 9/29/2020 8:36:00 PM

Hi David..... More in relation to Honest Con than your touching Haiku..... You're so dear..... Yes, I was expressing my vengeful side there.... It was kind of evil..... And whingey, woa is me...... Referring to average people as privileged. It definitely had to be deleted, especially if the intended victim read it, I could have deviated and excused it as something else, but it would have incriminated me. Not sure if I will try to prove my point by taking someone for a ride, surely no point!!

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 10/2/2020 5:16:00 AM

- You're a living legend, David -

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/29/2020 11:33:00 PM

Ha ha incriminated through our poetry, you are wicked Sigrid, it was brilliant but I understand, I’ve deleted a few of my own, thought they looked good at the time but after sleeping on it, and feeling refreshed it was like someone else had written the poem, there is no victim if they are willing participants your giving them something they’d never have got except for their privileged position, I read it as a symbiotic relationship an honest con indeed, cheers David