Black Eyed Susan Poet Verse

A Balancing Act

To Shaman Aboriginals
"Dreamtime" was the virginity
Of the earth
Before the dirt
Was soiled by humanity

Using crystals or their bare feet
They harness the earth's energy
To channel the grid
Over which we live
To balance and restore harmony


(Austrialian Aboriginals) 

Received 11th place in "The Shaman's Way" contest
Received 12th place in "5th poem on the soup" contest

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Patrick Cornwall July 15, 2012 at 7:15 AM excellent poem and congrats on placing in each contest and featured write ....Patrick

Poet Destroyer A July 8, 2012 at 3:50 PM susan, congratulations with your featured poem of the week.. hope you are enjoying yours~Always ;-) PD

Kim Merryman December 3, 2011 at 2:40 PM Congrats on your win, Susan. Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown November 30, 2011 at 6:48 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "5th Poem on the Soup" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath November 29, 2011 at 11:14 PM Congratulation on your win for your nice write. Have a nice day, my friend. bl

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2011 at 10:48 PM I can hardly believe I had never read this one before. I thought i'd seen all your poetry, Susan. Glad this contest showed me otherwise. Sorry this didn't do better. It's really nice.

Poet Destroyer A November 29, 2011 at 10:44 PM SUSAN, ;-) ,.. Congratulations on your wonderful win!! Thank you for the support and honor of reading the 5th poem you posted on the soup. * Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.

Bob Quigley November 29, 2011 at 10:22 PM Congratulations Susan on your win in the 5th poem contest.

Anne Rutherford June 28, 2011 at 4:38 PM Very well done Susan , last stanza my favourite. kudos for the win.Anne

Nivitha Ann Paul June 8, 2011 at 10:04 AM nyc:)

Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2011 at 5:49 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Susan in Debbie Guzzi's contest "The Shaman's Way". Love, Carol

Jack Horne April 17, 2011 at 5:05 AM Amazing poem, Susan. Many congrats : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 16, 2011 at 8:57 PM Congrats Susan on your winning poem in Debbie's contest luv.. see my blog also ..u are one of my winners in my contest however am having a problem posting my winners so did the list on my blog.. hope they fix it by tomorrow luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta April 16, 2011 at 7:27 PM Congratulations the win in the contest of debbie, Susan

James Foulk April 13, 2011 at 4:23 PM a beautiful piece of well written poetry. thank you for your comment for Under the Old Elm Tree

Jeff Morehead April 13, 2011 at 1:05 PM Susan, I really like your style of writing. Thanks for the comments, and yes I am open to any type of comment. Jeff

Carol Sunshine Brown April 13, 2011 at 6:14 AM What a beautiful sunny day here at my house. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Susan. I hope you will enjoy your day and that you find inspiration along the way. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta April 12, 2011 at 5:45 PM Quite informative and new way of practising shamanism, Susan

Wilma Neels April 12, 2011 at 1:35 PM Quit an interesting write Susan, wishing you the best of luck for the contest :)

Debbie Guzzi April 12, 2011 at 12:30 PM Hi Susan so glad you worked on an entry and this subject is very facinating. I wanted to let you know these are not limerick's the form is metered and is a comedic form often even crass humor, also you have some time expand on the theme a bit more what do the Believers look like? what do they say dreamtime looks like? [for a form simply put verse] Light & Love