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A Bag of Thoughts

I carry a bag with me Packing it inside of my head We all pack things in different ways Or sometimes we travel light instead At times the load seems heavy With hoarding our memories Never sharing any in our lives The burden of it all causes an overflow We pack our joys and sorrows And keep space for our tomorrows We unpack and repack Just to fit in all that we lack Never knowing sometimes how To face this mess we make Sometimes it takes a little courage To gather thoughts strewn on the floor A lot of effort goes into figuring What to carry and what to throw A hidden pocket my most precious I store My imagination and a heart that you adore! 24.6.2021 Sponsor: Charles Messina Contest: Surprise me.

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Date: 6/24/2021 11:07:00 AM
Hello Carol Mitra, Wow! I never thought of thoughts being in a bag. Very clever. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/25/2021 10:35:00 AM
Hello Carol, yes don't throw every thoughts into a bag. You might need them. So leave some out. Thank you. enjoy your day my friend.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 6/24/2021 6:49:00 PM
Thanks dear Darlene....Yes don't we throw everything into a bag? So thoughts go in as well...you too :)
Date: 6/24/2021 4:08:00 AM
Loved this metaphorical write. Beautifully stated . All the best for contest
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Carol Mitra
Date: 6/24/2021 4:38:00 AM
Thanks dear Rama....much love do take care :)
Date: 6/24/2021 3:43:00 AM
We all carry those bags Carol, keeping the special ones in a secret place. Hope you're well and good luck in the contest. Tom
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Carol Mitra
Date: 6/24/2021 4:36:00 AM
Thank you dear Tom...same to you...Do take care :)

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