A Bag of Dreams

A Bag Of Dreams 

A wonderful life, 
In it was me, 
Above a cloud, 
Below the sea, 
Breathing slow 
With angels about
But I couldn't move
Nor could I shout. 

A stranger spoke, 
I knew him well, 
Of a distant light, 
A tolling bell,
And I said yes,
I know that place 
And I followed him 
Into empty space. 

Where corridors raced
Yet I was still, 
As if pinned down 
Against my will, 
Tingling limbs 
And feeling cold, 
I surrendered my body, 
Heart and soul. 

Where I met myself 
In another guise, 
Older than me, 
Grey and wise, 
But he didn't glance 
Nor knew my name, 
Like different people 
Who looked the same. 

He collected things
Like love and hope, 
Wrapped in beauty 
And tied with rope, 
Passion, humility, 
Empathy and pride 
And a million desires
All stuffed inside. 

The closer I got 
The further he ran,
Then my teeth fell out 
As a nightmare began, 
Everything beautiful 
Ripped apart 
The tiny fragments 
Of my broken heart. 

One by one 
They disappeared, 
Apart from the deformed, 
Grotesque and weird, 
The hours passed
Til morning arrived, 
"Thank God!" I said, 
"I'm still alive'.

And as I awoke 
My hair was grey, 
A wise old man 
Lay where I lay, 
He knew of me, 
From my sleep, it seems 
And by his side 
Was a bag of dreams. 

© RJVHorton2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/18/2015 6:04:00 AM
Beautifully vivid and rhythmic!
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Date: 12/18/2015 5:29:00 AM
Magnificent and well written :)
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