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I find this animal so gross looking. If you never saw one from behind, here is google link:

 

https://www.google.com/search?q=images+of+baboons&tbm=isch&tbo=u&source=univ&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjzlZGX-u7VAhUC2GMKHYFRAbUQsAQIJQ&biw=1920&bih=974#imgrc=GGqRsFG5_NwlvM:

A baboon at the zoo cleverly made gestures to me like a friend, then turned right around, displaying to me his giant red ugly rear end! Aug. 23, 2017 for the Animal Nonsense Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/15/2017 12:31:00 PM
Yeah, not the politest of animals!! Nicely-penned, Andrea. Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/15/2017 7:24:00 PM
too late. I already lost!!
Date: 9/3/2017 7:04:00 AM
Oh !I have seen their off-color gesture in the zoo.They are pretty much vulgar to their human kiths.Good luck in the contest, Andie.God bless your family.Love.
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Date: 8/31/2017 6:09:00 AM
Perhaps reading this in hindsight, It was deserving of a spot in the winners circle. Thank you for entering my contest, kind regards, Kevin x
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/31/2017 7:27:00 PM
Next time, don't do a premier contest. haha!! I stopped judging because I can't keep lists to only ten wins!
Date: 8/25/2017 12:54:00 AM
Ha ha, a funny moment:)
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Date: 8/24/2017 10:42:00 PM
Andrea, the only good thing about seeing a baboon from behind is that it is walking away from you.
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Date: 8/24/2017 7:36:00 PM
Oh, Sis, this has me laughing. Too funny.
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Date: 8/24/2017 6:39:00 PM
Tut tut Petal, shame on you mocking the Kim Kardashian's of the natural world, lol. Though I know what you mean. Take care, Richard
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/24/2017 10:40:00 PM
hahaha. I laughed out loud to read what you said here about Kardashian. It's amazing to me that women actually want their butts to appear larger! WAIT. In the natural world, this actually attracts the male when it's the female's time to mate. Ok, now I totally get what you are saying!!
Date: 8/24/2017 5:46:00 PM
It is probably like me Andrea, i like to think, the goodness inside, more than makes up for the exterior, interesting poem...
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Date: 8/24/2017 5:01:00 PM
I have seen baboons,too. Funny to think that they are related to them. Funny stuff here!! I am putting out my 11th chapbook and it should arrive soon. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/24/2017 2:49:00 PM
Well that's a fine howdy do...thanks for the chuckles Andrea
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Date: 8/24/2017 1:28:00 PM
no thank you on the picture, and you are correct, not a pretty sight, but your poem made my day
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Date: 8/24/2017 11:59:00 AM
Wowww, put some ointment on that or something...nasty!
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Date: 8/24/2017 11:16:00 AM
Many think it's hilarious...it is actually a mating ritual of the female during ovulation
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Date: 8/24/2017 11:11:00 AM
They are ugly, aren't they?
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Date: 8/24/2017 8:57:00 AM
LOL Andrea. Great title too!
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Date: 8/24/2017 8:21:00 AM
Funny till the end lol...I'm sure they look at us and wonder too...at the zoo...god bless you...^WW^
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Date: 8/24/2017 7:17:00 AM
This one is a sure win! So well described, including the end! A LOL moment!
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Date: 8/24/2017 2:47:00 AM
ah ah ah! what a funny poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/24/2017 2:20:00 AM
ha ha ha very funny Andrea and I love the title!:-) hugs jan xx
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