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A 17 Word Love Story

We fell in love
watching a sky
freckled with lightning
being held by you
is beautifully brightening

boyfriendloveraini do not know?

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Dorian Petersen Potter

October 27, 2014 at 2:25 AM

Very nice and sweet! Hi Emma, I want to extend you a very warm welcome to P.S! :) Hope you're very happy here and meet and make lots of friends. ;) Love and light! xxxx D.

Suzanne C. Goudreau

October 26, 2014 at 6:10 PM

Welcome dear Emma! Your poem is beautiful and holds a bright future ahead! Thank you for sharing. Please rate and comment on my poem also being featured this week. Thank You

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 8, 2014 at 1:27 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Emma- I choose your first lovely and very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

October 7, 2014 at 4:50 PM

Emma, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

October 7, 2014 at 11:04 AM

Emma, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT