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Sometimes in the orange of evening, a doorway transports me to other realms filled with unexpected imagination -- worlds of swirling light, as mystical trees and gracious strangers become one city of a family railing through dusk's perfect moonlight: Against the burning skyline every tick of a gesture a happenstance charges my essence and absorbs this space where discoveries allow me a chance to revel at what is miraculous...the dance of kaleidoscopic stars, toddlers wiggling like cherubs , fireflies dressed like the Orion... and I go with the flow, translucent as beams of wonder guide me through a glass panel of simple marvels I need not comprehend... because my heart awaits the next swing of child-like enthrallment. For Brian's Choice Q

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Date: 5/23/2020 1:26:00 PM
Marvelous journey into twilight. Wonderful vivid imagery. Congratulations on your first place, Nette.
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Date: 5/7/2017 2:28:00 PM
Such a fantastic little fantasy ride, congrats
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Date: 5/6/2017 3:05:00 AM
Some lovely imagery, Nette. Especially like the "fireflies dressed like Orion" line. Congratulations on your high-placed win! Regards, John.
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Date: 5/6/2017 1:07:00 AM
A thank you, a hug and a congrats to you.
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Date: 4/1/2017 1:10:00 PM
All the worthy people below are correct - such a pleasure to read, Nette - the wonders of existence at play in your mind.
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Date: 3/29/2017 6:33:00 PM
Outstanding poetry revealing a world of heavenly delight!
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Date: 3/29/2017 4:10:00 PM
Very beautiful nette
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Date: 3/29/2017 3:48:00 PM
Such an enchanting poem, though I'm sure I have said that before to you but it seems mostly every thing you write I find enchanting. Loved this Nette.
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Date: 3/29/2017 3:09:00 PM
- Beautiful, Nette (I got the flu ... 39-40 temp. ... just wanted to post a smile today :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/29/2017 2:36:00 PM
your imagery dances off the page Nette - an absolute joy to read your beautifully flowing style:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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