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9 Years

I still remember the night You first landed in my sight. The bar was busy and loud, But I saw you through the crowd. You were more man than boy And you left me feeling shy and coy. I remember the smile on your face; The way it made my heart flutter and race. We talked the night away, Until the barman said we couldn’t stay. You took things slowly, Because you were older than me. From text, movies to dance, We both took a chance To find a love that could be true; And it brought me you! So even though we’re years apart, You will always have my heart. Even when we’re both old and grey, I’ll never go away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/10/2018 5:03:00 AM
Just Jame, years don't make a difference when it comes to finding the perfect one... Enjoyed reading your poetry. Linda
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Date: 1/10/2018 5:13:00 AM
You're right, age doesn't make a difference. Thank you for reading! :-)
Date: 12/18/2017 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Just Jane
Date: 1/10/2018 5:05:00 AM
Thank you very much!
Date: 12/18/2017 2:53:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win:-) Alexis
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Just Jane
Date: 1/10/2018 5:05:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 12/18/2017 1:03:00 PM
Love this! :)
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Date: 12/8/2017 1:21:00 PM
Just Jane,a beautiful love poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Just Jane
Date: 12/11/2017 3:39:00 AM
Thank you, I appreciate the feedback!

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