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911

The world that day did cry. We saw those two planes fly. Into the two great towers. We watched and prayed for hours. Our hopes and prayers we'd give. In hopes that most would live. For there were many heroes. That day on ground zero. But soon we would find out. That there were more planes out. There was a great big sigh. We knew more souls would die. We heard their last goodbyes. Which made their loved ones cry. Their souls were saved that day. While all on board did pray. For in their hearts they knew. Their lives on earth were through. That big plane did go down. With no survivors found. But as heroes they did stand. That day on God's right hand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/6/2010 9:40:00 PM
excellent
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Date: 10/27/2010 6:12:00 PM
you must be a country person... enjoyed.
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Date: 10/24/2010 7:50:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. I really enjoyed reading your poem and hope to read more soon
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Date: 10/24/2010 2:26:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Debra. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2010 6:59:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your intense write ... with its creative theme.. soup recently had a contest about this subject..so check out the contest page offered to new members ..good luck with luv...
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