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86 Weeds

I take controlled and specific aim near the shackled flowers Where the horde of wizened weeds loiter and elicit strangulation My cartridge carefully loaded with mordacious poison You shall not trifle, nor stifle my blooms, Here's to your cessation! 3/29/2017

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Date: 4/9/2017 3:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Donna, Roy. :))
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Donna Roberts
Date: 4/9/2017 5:35:00 AM
Thanks for reading Roy I appreciate that
Date: 4/8/2017 7:34:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats
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Donna Roberts
Date: 4/8/2017 8:25:00 PM
Thank you friend
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Donna Roberts
Date: 4/8/2017 8:24:00 PM
Thank you friend
Date: 3/30/2017 8:34:00 AM
Wow, you did it all in 4 lines! Well done Donna ...A7
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Donna Roberts
Date: 3/30/2017 10:45:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph!
Date: 3/29/2017 2:17:00 PM
Can I borrow a cartridge to rid my lawn of Dandelions! Loved the humour here I predict this will do well in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Donna Roberts
Date: 3/29/2017 2:21:00 PM
Thanks Jan...sure C'mon by!

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