86 Weeds

I take controlled and specific aim near the shackled flowers
       Where the horde of wizened weeds loiter and elicit strangulation
       My cartridge carefully loaded with mordacious poison
       You shall not trifle, nor stifle my blooms, Here's to your cessation!

             3/29/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pett Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 3:02 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Donna, Roy. :))
Roberts Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 5:35 AM
Thanks for reading Roy I appreciate that
May Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Dropping back with my congrats
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April 8, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Thank you friend
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April 8, 2017 at 8:24 PM
Thank you friend
May Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 8:34 AM
Wow, you did it all in 4 lines! Well done Donna ...A7
Roberts Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 10:45 AM
Thanks, Joseph!
Allison Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 2:17 PM
Can I borrow a cartridge to rid my lawn of Dandelions! Loved the humour here I predict this will do well in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
Roberts Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 2:21 PM
Thanks Jan...sure C'mon by!
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