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What it must be like
For the white snow falling down
To the warm black earth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ventura Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 9:49 AM
A BELIEVING A GREAT FEELING.....indeed
Brown Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 5:47 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Xolani. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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October 17, 2012 at 3:01 PM
Xolani I have read them all and I think they are just excellent, very strong images indeed, you obviously like Haiku...David
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